ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Suggested Deviants
Suggested Collections
You Might Like…
Featured in Groups
Description
Crimson beat
born a breezy he grew up in the breezy realm preforming his duties like doing
the pollen run under his cousin Seabreeze's command and while this was fine it was
not what he wanted to do,from a young age crimson had been obsessed with music from
both his realm and the pony realm, even putting it onto a Ipod to listen to while doing
the pollen run which always earned him a scolding from Seabreeze as he was supposed to be
listening to his cousin's instructions and not D.J. Pon3's latest album and while he had
stated many a time that he would be just like Vinyl and become a famous d.j. to everyone
of both realms it was soothing to either be laughed at or taken as a adorable joke.
for the breezies it was a laugh as breezies could not get a cutie mark and all share the same
special talent of collecting pollen and as for the ponies he wanted to win over, seeing a
breezy sized mixing table and them tiny beats coming out of it was just something that
was just too adorable about it to take seriously and despite the many temper tantrums he
threw about how him, his music and his d.j.ing should be taken seriously all of the ponies
still just patronized him.
"hehe of course you are sweetie"
"No offense but you're just too adorable with your wittle mixing table"
all of this building up to the night where everything changed for the little breezy.
It was late on a saturday night around 11:45pm, crimson was coming out of a night club
in the pony realm brooding at the mocking and condesending comments he had received about
how adorable & precious he looked with his little mic and mixing table, he stopped sitting
on a rock close to the crack back to the breezy realm to clear his head, but no matter how
hard he tried he could not get all those nagging thoughts and feelings out of him, the hate
of what he was and the overwhelming content for those who had mocked him,
dark ideas and desires began manifesting in his head,
Ideas of Luna & Nightmare Moon,
of how Luna's hate allowed the darkness in her heart to change her form,
I have the same hate can my darkness,my hate free me from this pathetic body?
focusing hard trying to summon Nightmare Moon's spirit or his own darkness to turn him into
a nightmare and thus a full sized pony, but only to wake something else up.
crimson's concentration was interrupted by the chimes of a clock,
"STUPID PONYVILLE BELL TOWER"
he thought to himself, but as he opened his eyes he was shocked at what he saw.
The moon was a clock face ringing the 12 chimes of midnight and upon the 12th stroke a beam
shot down from the moon into the lake turning it to lava which began to violently swirl in
the center turning into a whirlpool, bats could be heard screeching and screaming as they were
set a blaze flying out of the whirlpool, then from the center of the whirlpool rose a ominous
green flame, it floated across the lake of lava towards crimson, stopping and hovering in front
of him, then there was a blinding flash of light as the light cleared the surroundings had
returned to normal but crimson froze with fear at what was standing in front of him.
A evil looking pony, her teeth sharp as knives, her mane was nothing but burning green flames
and her nightmare moon like eyes pierced his very soul, seeing the breezy in fear the pony
relinquished her insane grin looking more relaxed and friendly as she spoke.
"do not be afraid little breezy im here to help you, here maybe this will make it easier on you."
there was another flash of light and as the flash dissipated once more she had appeared next to him
in breezy form introducing herself as Midnight DevilWitch BlingBling or just midnight for short
and explained that just how she had changed from pony to breezy she could do the reverse for
crimson turning him from a breezy into a pony and while he was excited at the idea her cutie mark of a upside down pentagram and the fact she had come out of a lake of lava did raise a few alarm
bells.
"whats the catch?"
"hehe catch, silly crimson for now there is not catch, I may be the devil but im still fair
in my business, No im here to 1st off offer you a free trial then we can take it to the next level
if you wish,here is the trial contract, no small print or anything."
crimson causiously taking the small contract and reading it to himself.
This is a legally binding contract
between Midnight DevilWitch BlingBling and the participant,
for a
* X 13 day free trial of the pony to breezy potion
after the 13 days are over Midnight will return to the participant
where she will conduct a review of how the trial went and a
review of this contract into a more permanent one if said participant
is happy with the trail and the results there in.
or if the participant is not happy with the results then they can take
the pay to exit fee of one of the following depending on there circumstances
* 69 Bits
* 69 Pieces of Pollen
* a item of Midnight's Choosing
* one hair from the participants mane
sign here if you are satisfied with the terms and wish to begin your free trial
X______________
"69 Really?"
"what can i say im still 12 years old XD, so you want to take the free trial?"
crimson overjoyed at having the chance to live as a pony even if it was only for a few days
jumped at the opportunity.
"ummm so do I have to sign in like blood?"
"HAHA Oh no for a free trial pen is fine"
a tiny quill appearing in the demon breezy's hoof and without hesitation crimson signed the contract
with both it and the quill disappearing the second he was done.
"excellent, its a pleasure doing business with you hun, now off to bed with you, go to sleep
and when you wake up there will be 1 potion in your fridge that will turn you into a pony along
with a map on your table to a house of mine in the pony world you can call have fo the next 13 days the house itself having a fridge with the other 12 potions in it, anyway I have to run as I have other clients to see so see ya in 13 days little breezy."
kissing the breezy on the cheek before opening a portal on the floor in front of them,
the demon breezy jumping into it & the portal closing behind her.
The next 13 days when great for crimson, getting to live his dream as a pony & ponies cheering at
the d.j. he always wanted to be, he was no Vinyl Scratch but it was nice not to be mocked for once.
but as he returned to the shack on his final night upon opening the door there she was, sitting in a comfy arm chair by a lit fire.
"so did you enjoy yourself crimson?"
still over come with the excitement & joy of his experience he proceeded to blab on and on
about all the things that he had done and how much fun it was all the while Midnight sat
patiently and listened with a smile on her face and once he was done she replied with her
question.
"well it sounds like some breezy really enjoyed my free trial, so are you ready to discuss our
more permanent contract?"
upon hearing her question he froze for a second as it hit him that the reason why he got to be a
pony, he had been having so much fun he forgot all about the contract, taking a deep breath to
compose himself as no matter whether he said yes or no he still had to exit the trial contract,
nervously he looked at her and with a quiver in his voice he said sure.
Midnight making a desk appear in front of her as well as another arm chair on the opposite side of the desk.
"Well then please take a seat"
gesturing at the empty chair, very nervously crimson came over and sat down in the chair shaking at the thought of what Midnight would say or do.
"Relax hun, there is nothing to be worried about, for now its just a friendly chat about your trial, you know some feedback on how the trial went and such, need something to calm you down?
tea perhaps?
making a cup of tea spawn on the desk next to him, crimson taking a sip while thanking her.
"you're welcome, Luna's pet dragon taught me that one, that is that tea always help you feel relaxed but I digress lets get down to business and from your rambling it seems like you enjoyed your free trial."
Crimson now feeling more relaxed got confidence back into his voice and happily began to give
feedback to the demon pony and after she had finished jotting down notes on his feedback she asked him the question again.
"So now what would you like to do about your contract crimson, pay to exit or move or buy the full package shall we say?"
Crimson sat in silence for a moment, over the past 13 days his dream had come ture, he could make music and be a d.j. like his role model Vinyl without being mocked for his breezy form and while he wanted this so badly it was going to be a deal with the devil herself witch could have all kinds of hidden loop holes Midnight could use against him, but she had been fair and honest with him so far so there was at least no harm in seeing what she had to offer before he made his choice.
"ummm.....well I do need to pay the exit fee for this trial 1st right?
Midnight not even flinching in the slightest, just keeping her calm composure, still smiling.
"well that depends, if our business her is done then yes.
But if you were to take out a permanent contract then there is no exit fee as
its more like a transfer from one contract to another."
Crimson pausing for a moment before asking nervously, afraid he would enrage her with his indecision
"ummm....well can I see what the full contract has in it before I make up my mind...
that is if its ok with you.."
Midnight still not flinching or reacting in any way, she just kept her evil smile and enthusiastic tone.
"of course you can and relax hun you don't have to be worried at all about me being impatient,
ive got all the time in the world quite literally, I just want to make sure all my clients are
satisfied before entering a contract like this as its like getting married or getting a pet its a very big commitment."
Midnight making a bigger contract and quill appear on the desk and looks at him.
"so here is how this is going to work im going to read through this contract with you and if there is anything you would like to add or change then please feel free to let me know however im sure it will be more than to your liking as permanent contracts offer a lot more perks to reward trial members for the loyalty and willingness to enter a full on contract, as permanent clients are like my children and I want to make sure that you are all well now that you are under my employment so to speak so here goes"
midnight picking up the contract she begins to slowly read through it aloud for crimson to hear.
so then she proclaims
"this is a full time permanent legally binding contract between me, Midnight Devilwitch BlingBling
and the participant Crimson beat the breezy.
if the participant takes out this full time contract there is no exit fee for there trial contract as it just a changes contract rather than a exit.
in this full time contract you crimson will receive
* a factory of your own that will produce musical instruments to give you a constant income
* a bank account, credit card and paypal for your monetary needs.
* phone with a special button that, which is connected to a phone in my castle in the nether if you ever need me,
* and a update to your breezy potion, so now it will last 72 hours rather than 24 hours...."
midnight been interrupted by crimson raising his hoof, with midnight taking his question.
"well umm....while i was a pony I saw something rather cool and I was wondering if its not too much trouble if its possible to do this"
Midnight question what it was with crimson proceeding to tell her about flutterbat and the bat pony thing, midnight nodding and replying.
"of course hun thats fine, ill even throw in some more just for you like
* a private orchard full of apples for you to snack on
* the orchard full of bats to hang with
* and a bat scepter to control the bats to do your bidding
* and of course the breezy potion that will turn you into a bat pony for 72 hours
* oh and a additional potion that can turn you back into a breezy in case of a emergency.
crimson nodding and saying thats fine.
at that point some words on the contract changing to what midnight said before his eyes
before midnight continued reading
" so your potion that turns you into a bat pony for 72 hours blah blah blah back to where we were,
the potion also giving you a vast knowledge of machinery to help you run the factory and a
enhanced knowledge of musical things to help you with your new talent that leads us into the last
thing that is you getting a cutie mark without even having to try.
now as for the payment so to speak, as mentioned if you sign there is no exit fee for the trial
as it is just a transfer of contract, however this new contract does however have 2 big clauses which
im sure you are aware of that are.
the 1st of which is there is a entry fee which is your soul
WOW THERES A SHOCK WOULD NEVER HAVE SEEN THAT COMING"
she says sarcastically before continuing
"which of course leads us onto the 2nd term which again is kinda obvious that being the price
is your soul meaning there is no exit, once you're in you're in for all eternity,
which brings onto the last thing that is ownership,
if you enter that means I own your soul which means I own you,
you will be my obedient pet that will willingly do anything I say because you will be compeled to
because you want to make your mistress happy,
you will still know what is going on and you my even beg me to stop which is music to my ears but
you are a puppet and a puppets only purpose is to entertain and that is what I like,
when everyone pays attention to me and entertains me,
so with that all said thats the end.
so crimson beat the breezy,
* a famous dj bat pony with his own factory
* eternal life
* and anything you could ever ask for
do you want to become my new toy and make all your dreams come true?"
Crimson was so excited, everything he could ever want, all his dream coming true and it was just
a signature away, but was he really going to do this?
was he really going to reduce himself to a puppet to be a bat pony d.j.?
he sat in silence for what to him seems like hours, every so often looking up and over at the demon pony who seemed to have lost all interest and was now playing a 3DS on silent as not to disturb him,
after around half a hour crimson had reached his decision but the words themselves were the hardest things to say, every time he opened his mouth it was like the words were stuck, never being
able to leave his lips but eventually they did.
"i....i....r....ready"
midnight still lost in her game, crimson thinking he would be ignored again got a bit more
confidence in his voice and repeated himself
"I'm ready Midnight"
he was ignored once more
"umm...Mid..."
Before he could finish he was interrupted with Midnight screaming YES, while throwing her hooves
and going on to brag about her accomplishment.
"i did it, i beat majunga on 3 heart run with with no magic milk, no great changeling sword
and no enraged celestia face decoration"
looks over to see a confused crimson
"sorry sometimes I can get really into these things, especially if its a nightmare challenge
run, anyway what decision has the little breezy come to?"
Crimson taking a deep breath as he nervously answers
"I.....I....want...."
Crimson now having Midnight focusing on him made it a lot harder to get out his words,stuttering
he just said any words he could get hold of to try and make his decision he had made come out.
"I...I..want....you...mistress....that is to say............yes.....I mean........"
he was stopped by Midnight softly putting her hoof on his mouth as she knew what he meant.
"its ok hun I understand, so then lets get you ready"
coming round to his side of the desk grinning as she kneels in front of him and takes his hoof,
proclaiming that it might hurt a bit as she lowers crimson's hoof down onto one of her horns fast
enough to cause his hoof to bleed, Crimson trying to recoil his hoof but Midnight kept a firm grip,
she made a solid gold quill spawn upon which she dipped into the open wound on his hoof.
"this time you do have to sign in blood"
she proclaims as she put the quill in crimson's undamaged right hoof,
wanting to get it over with he signs his name in his own blood without hesitation.
The golden quill disappearing, Midnight ignoring the contract for a moment she puts her mouth
over the wound and breaths into it, as she does Crimson felt a strange burning sensation and as it went away so did the pain, looking down to see that as Midnight removed her mouth the wound had
completely healed.
Midnight standing back up,she picks the contract up looking at it for a moment to verify the signiture before making the quill re-appear for a moment to add her signature to complete the
contract and make it official, the quill and the contract poofing away with her now grinning at him with excitement, Crimson getting scared at the menacing grin and insane look in her eye that was being directed at crimson as she spoke.
"thank you Crimson, it was a pleasure doing business with you,
now there is only one thing left to for us to do this night"
crimson nervously asking
"what....what...is that?"
Midnight's grin getting bigger as she spoke
"Your entry fee"
Midnight taking a few steps back and just standing there staring at Crimson grinning,
Crimson getting really scared as he did not know what she was planning, but before he had time to
think he felt himself rise up into the air by his hooves, looking up to see two giant puppet crosses floating above him with strings coming down from them, he saw that two of the strings were attached to his front hooves which was what was lifting him up, following strings he could see that two more were attached to his rear hooves, 1 to his back, 1 to his flank, 1 round his neck and 1 to his head, as he floated there helplessly dangling from the strings the floor beneath him began to glow, looking down to see a glowing red pentagram in a ring under his feet, Crimson panicing but just as he could get a sense of what was happening he could feel the crosses moving, he felt the string around his neck tighten and the one attached to his head move, forcing him to look up straight at Midnight, having no control over his body what so ever midnight spoke.
"like it Crimson this is the kind of power I have over you now, I can do this and all sorts of other things to you at my will"
making a diaper, bib, bonnet, boots and pacifier spawn on Crimson
"Now dance my big baby"
Midnight manipulating the crosses to make Crimson's body move to her will,
all crimson could do was dangle there helplessly and suck on the pasifier as Midnight
played with her new puppet, Crimson blushing at what he was wearing and unable to stop
what was happening to him, Midnight stopping rather quickly though to speak.
"but you're not a puppet to be played with just yet,
you are on them strings to keep you in place while we conduct our final order of business."
Crimson still being controlled could only suck on thepacifiers ,he tried to get words out but
they were all muffled by the pasifier so you could not make out what he was saying,
Midnight continuing on.
"Now you might feel a very strong pulling sensation and you most likely will black out but
trust me you will be fine and remain unharmed and when you wake up you will be in your new
home as a bat pony and your new life will begin... now then say
I am Crimson Beat and i love dressing up as a big baby stallion for my mommy Midnight"
Crimson completely under her control felt the string around his neck tighten even more, forcing
him to spit out the pacifier and repeat the line as much as he did not want to.
"I am Crimson Beat and I like dressing up as a big baby stallion for my mommy Midnight"
Midnight laughing as she watched the big baby stallion blushing with embarassment at what he
had just said.
"OK enough fun, time to finish up here so brace yourself Crimson and try not to be a big baby
about it.......oh looks like im a bit too late there HAHAHAHAHA"
Crimson pouting at her mocking comments,but this was interupted by all his strings tightening to
a ridiculous degree to the point where he could not move a muscle, Midnight getting into a stance
in front of him, her eye around her neck starting to glow, with the eye color changing from red
to blue, as it reached what looked like maximum power Midnight said activate, upon that word Crimson could feel it, a intense pulling sensation as if he was being sucked into the pendant,
as it continued and got more intense white particles started coming off of Crimson then he realized what was going on,the pendant was sucking his soul out, he made the deal so it was Midnight's now and she was sucking it out of his body into her pendant to be locked there for all eternity and
like Midnight said he could feel himself blacking out and just as he was going under he looked at Midnight, her grinning and the big baby stallion heard her last words before he went completely under.
"Welcome to the collection my new puppet"
Crimson awake,jumping up in shock, looking around to see he was in a nice shiny new office,
Midnight sitting beside him.
"morning hun how do you feel?"
Crimson feeling like he had only been out for a few seconds felt fine especially now that the
pulling sensation had gone.
"I feel fine but where am I and how did you do all this in like a day?"
Midnight giggling
"you're in the pent house of crimson industries, your office to be more precise where you will do
all of your work, also a day more like 2 weeks, you had your soul pulled from your body so your
usually out for a week or 2 but you're fine now."
Crimson standing up realizing something was on his body, looking down to see he was still wearing
the baby stuff shouting
"AND WHY AND I STILL DRESSED AS A BABY?!"
Midnight cackling at him
"Because you look so adorable when you're sleeping in that outfit"
Crimson scrunching his nose up at her, Midnight still grinning
"Relax hun it was a joke, its yours to do with as you please now, take it off and throw it away,
keep it because you secretly like it, or put someone else into it and make them embaress themsleves as your puppet for your entertainment, I don't care, for now I have other business to attend to so
I have to run, but I have left you a book with everything you need to know on your desk and if you need anything press the music note button on your telephone and either I or one of my demon ponies or one of my slaves in my castle will pick up and help you out"
walking over and giving him a hug and a kiss on the cheek.
"ok see ya later my big baby stallion"
giggling as she opened a portal and walked through it, the portal closing behind her,
Crimson pouting at the fact she had left him babyfied and while his top priority
was to get out of the baby outfit as quick as possible he wanted to 1st just have a
quick look around and out the windows to get his bearings.
Walking over to his desk he could see that he was just to the south of ponyville, his desk side
window looking down on the town with canterlot far in the background, Filthy Rich enterprises
tower of the left towering high above his new factory, to the east and west of the windows just showed off more of the industrial district and to the south he had a nice view of the everfree forest,
but also to the south one another roof of his factory covered in a glass like green house was his own private orchard filled with shining red, green and golden apples and being like flutterbat now he now needed and craved apples, a feeling of obsession coming over him as he stared hypnotically at the apples, starting to drool onto his bib a bit, his body telling him how good apples were and how he needed them, he could feel himself getting slightly aroused, his somewhat hard stallion hood pressing against the diaper, Crimson having to slap himself hard and look away, knowing he was a bat pony now and he would have to learn to control his craving for apples rather than being hypnotized by them also noticing as he was looking away that the orchard was filled with bats that he could use that scepter Midnight gave him on, now aware of where he was and what he had become it was time to start his new life, proceeding to take off all the baby stuff but just as he was about to throw the baby outfit away he thought about what midnight said and he did like the sound of it.
Why not keep it and make someone else put the baby stuff on for his entertainment,
then he could see how much fun it was to turn someone into his helpless puppet,
to make them do embarassing things against there will,
how it would make him feel like his mistress if he had that kind of control over someone,
giggling and saying to himself.
"hehe yes I like the sound of that,
oh i feel sorry for whoever ends up as my puppet......
oh wait no I don't and they won't mind as they will have no choice
but to love being my big baby puppet and obeying there daddy crimson.
and from that point on Crimson started his new life as the bat pony D.J. of ponyville,
selling instruments from his factory and converting those who found out his secrets into
the sub-woofers, but you all know that story and if not this was the back story chapter and the present day chapter about his rise to fame, the sub-woofers and the one he made into his puppet
to be a good daughter and obey his daddy crimson comes later.
THE END
"p.s. the one that got attached to my puppet crosses and now obeys there daddy Crimson is Insane Spyro.
Also tell me what you guys Think of Crimson beat's full origin Story also here's who midnight Devilwitch is and what she looks like
born a breezy he grew up in the breezy realm preforming his duties like doing
the pollen run under his cousin Seabreeze's command and while this was fine it was
not what he wanted to do,from a young age crimson had been obsessed with music from
both his realm and the pony realm, even putting it onto a Ipod to listen to while doing
the pollen run which always earned him a scolding from Seabreeze as he was supposed to be
listening to his cousin's instructions and not D.J. Pon3's latest album and while he had
stated many a time that he would be just like Vinyl and become a famous d.j. to everyone
of both realms it was soothing to either be laughed at or taken as a adorable joke.
for the breezies it was a laugh as breezies could not get a cutie mark and all share the same
special talent of collecting pollen and as for the ponies he wanted to win over, seeing a
breezy sized mixing table and them tiny beats coming out of it was just something that
was just too adorable about it to take seriously and despite the many temper tantrums he
threw about how him, his music and his d.j.ing should be taken seriously all of the ponies
still just patronized him.
"hehe of course you are sweetie"
"No offense but you're just too adorable with your wittle mixing table"
all of this building up to the night where everything changed for the little breezy.
It was late on a saturday night around 11:45pm, crimson was coming out of a night club
in the pony realm brooding at the mocking and condesending comments he had received about
how adorable & precious he looked with his little mic and mixing table, he stopped sitting
on a rock close to the crack back to the breezy realm to clear his head, but no matter how
hard he tried he could not get all those nagging thoughts and feelings out of him, the hate
of what he was and the overwhelming content for those who had mocked him,
dark ideas and desires began manifesting in his head,
Ideas of Luna & Nightmare Moon,
of how Luna's hate allowed the darkness in her heart to change her form,
I have the same hate can my darkness,my hate free me from this pathetic body?
focusing hard trying to summon Nightmare Moon's spirit or his own darkness to turn him into
a nightmare and thus a full sized pony, but only to wake something else up.
crimson's concentration was interrupted by the chimes of a clock,
"STUPID PONYVILLE BELL TOWER"
he thought to himself, but as he opened his eyes he was shocked at what he saw.
The moon was a clock face ringing the 12 chimes of midnight and upon the 12th stroke a beam
shot down from the moon into the lake turning it to lava which began to violently swirl in
the center turning into a whirlpool, bats could be heard screeching and screaming as they were
set a blaze flying out of the whirlpool, then from the center of the whirlpool rose a ominous
green flame, it floated across the lake of lava towards crimson, stopping and hovering in front
of him, then there was a blinding flash of light as the light cleared the surroundings had
returned to normal but crimson froze with fear at what was standing in front of him.
A evil looking pony, her teeth sharp as knives, her mane was nothing but burning green flames
and her nightmare moon like eyes pierced his very soul, seeing the breezy in fear the pony
relinquished her insane grin looking more relaxed and friendly as she spoke.
"do not be afraid little breezy im here to help you, here maybe this will make it easier on you."
there was another flash of light and as the flash dissipated once more she had appeared next to him
in breezy form introducing herself as Midnight DevilWitch BlingBling or just midnight for short
and explained that just how she had changed from pony to breezy she could do the reverse for
crimson turning him from a breezy into a pony and while he was excited at the idea her cutie mark of a upside down pentagram and the fact she had come out of a lake of lava did raise a few alarm
bells.
"whats the catch?"
"hehe catch, silly crimson for now there is not catch, I may be the devil but im still fair
in my business, No im here to 1st off offer you a free trial then we can take it to the next level
if you wish,here is the trial contract, no small print or anything."
crimson causiously taking the small contract and reading it to himself.
This is a legally binding contract
between Midnight DevilWitch BlingBling and the participant,
for a
* X 13 day free trial of the pony to breezy potion
after the 13 days are over Midnight will return to the participant
where she will conduct a review of how the trial went and a
review of this contract into a more permanent one if said participant
is happy with the trail and the results there in.
or if the participant is not happy with the results then they can take
the pay to exit fee of one of the following depending on there circumstances
* 69 Bits
* 69 Pieces of Pollen
* a item of Midnight's Choosing
* one hair from the participants mane
sign here if you are satisfied with the terms and wish to begin your free trial
X______________
"69 Really?"
"what can i say im still 12 years old XD, so you want to take the free trial?"
crimson overjoyed at having the chance to live as a pony even if it was only for a few days
jumped at the opportunity.
"ummm so do I have to sign in like blood?"
"HAHA Oh no for a free trial pen is fine"
a tiny quill appearing in the demon breezy's hoof and without hesitation crimson signed the contract
with both it and the quill disappearing the second he was done.
"excellent, its a pleasure doing business with you hun, now off to bed with you, go to sleep
and when you wake up there will be 1 potion in your fridge that will turn you into a pony along
with a map on your table to a house of mine in the pony world you can call have fo the next 13 days the house itself having a fridge with the other 12 potions in it, anyway I have to run as I have other clients to see so see ya in 13 days little breezy."
kissing the breezy on the cheek before opening a portal on the floor in front of them,
the demon breezy jumping into it & the portal closing behind her.
The next 13 days when great for crimson, getting to live his dream as a pony & ponies cheering at
the d.j. he always wanted to be, he was no Vinyl Scratch but it was nice not to be mocked for once.
but as he returned to the shack on his final night upon opening the door there she was, sitting in a comfy arm chair by a lit fire.
"so did you enjoy yourself crimson?"
still over come with the excitement & joy of his experience he proceeded to blab on and on
about all the things that he had done and how much fun it was all the while Midnight sat
patiently and listened with a smile on her face and once he was done she replied with her
question.
"well it sounds like some breezy really enjoyed my free trial, so are you ready to discuss our
more permanent contract?"
upon hearing her question he froze for a second as it hit him that the reason why he got to be a
pony, he had been having so much fun he forgot all about the contract, taking a deep breath to
compose himself as no matter whether he said yes or no he still had to exit the trial contract,
nervously he looked at her and with a quiver in his voice he said sure.
Midnight making a desk appear in front of her as well as another arm chair on the opposite side of the desk.
"Well then please take a seat"
gesturing at the empty chair, very nervously crimson came over and sat down in the chair shaking at the thought of what Midnight would say or do.
"Relax hun, there is nothing to be worried about, for now its just a friendly chat about your trial, you know some feedback on how the trial went and such, need something to calm you down?
tea perhaps?
making a cup of tea spawn on the desk next to him, crimson taking a sip while thanking her.
"you're welcome, Luna's pet dragon taught me that one, that is that tea always help you feel relaxed but I digress lets get down to business and from your rambling it seems like you enjoyed your free trial."
Crimson now feeling more relaxed got confidence back into his voice and happily began to give
feedback to the demon pony and after she had finished jotting down notes on his feedback she asked him the question again.
"So now what would you like to do about your contract crimson, pay to exit or move or buy the full package shall we say?"
Crimson sat in silence for a moment, over the past 13 days his dream had come ture, he could make music and be a d.j. like his role model Vinyl without being mocked for his breezy form and while he wanted this so badly it was going to be a deal with the devil herself witch could have all kinds of hidden loop holes Midnight could use against him, but she had been fair and honest with him so far so there was at least no harm in seeing what she had to offer before he made his choice.
"ummm.....well I do need to pay the exit fee for this trial 1st right?
Midnight not even flinching in the slightest, just keeping her calm composure, still smiling.
"well that depends, if our business her is done then yes.
But if you were to take out a permanent contract then there is no exit fee as
its more like a transfer from one contract to another."
Crimson pausing for a moment before asking nervously, afraid he would enrage her with his indecision
"ummm....well can I see what the full contract has in it before I make up my mind...
that is if its ok with you.."
Midnight still not flinching or reacting in any way, she just kept her evil smile and enthusiastic tone.
"of course you can and relax hun you don't have to be worried at all about me being impatient,
ive got all the time in the world quite literally, I just want to make sure all my clients are
satisfied before entering a contract like this as its like getting married or getting a pet its a very big commitment."
Midnight making a bigger contract and quill appear on the desk and looks at him.
"so here is how this is going to work im going to read through this contract with you and if there is anything you would like to add or change then please feel free to let me know however im sure it will be more than to your liking as permanent contracts offer a lot more perks to reward trial members for the loyalty and willingness to enter a full on contract, as permanent clients are like my children and I want to make sure that you are all well now that you are under my employment so to speak so here goes"
midnight picking up the contract she begins to slowly read through it aloud for crimson to hear.
so then she proclaims
"this is a full time permanent legally binding contract between me, Midnight Devilwitch BlingBling
and the participant Crimson beat the breezy.
if the participant takes out this full time contract there is no exit fee for there trial contract as it just a changes contract rather than a exit.
in this full time contract you crimson will receive
* a factory of your own that will produce musical instruments to give you a constant income
* a bank account, credit card and paypal for your monetary needs.
* phone with a special button that, which is connected to a phone in my castle in the nether if you ever need me,
* and a update to your breezy potion, so now it will last 72 hours rather than 24 hours...."
midnight been interrupted by crimson raising his hoof, with midnight taking his question.
"well umm....while i was a pony I saw something rather cool and I was wondering if its not too much trouble if its possible to do this"
Midnight question what it was with crimson proceeding to tell her about flutterbat and the bat pony thing, midnight nodding and replying.
"of course hun thats fine, ill even throw in some more just for you like
* a private orchard full of apples for you to snack on
* the orchard full of bats to hang with
* and a bat scepter to control the bats to do your bidding
* and of course the breezy potion that will turn you into a bat pony for 72 hours
* oh and a additional potion that can turn you back into a breezy in case of a emergency.
crimson nodding and saying thats fine.
at that point some words on the contract changing to what midnight said before his eyes
before midnight continued reading
" so your potion that turns you into a bat pony for 72 hours blah blah blah back to where we were,
the potion also giving you a vast knowledge of machinery to help you run the factory and a
enhanced knowledge of musical things to help you with your new talent that leads us into the last
thing that is you getting a cutie mark without even having to try.
now as for the payment so to speak, as mentioned if you sign there is no exit fee for the trial
as it is just a transfer of contract, however this new contract does however have 2 big clauses which
im sure you are aware of that are.
the 1st of which is there is a entry fee which is your soul
WOW THERES A SHOCK WOULD NEVER HAVE SEEN THAT COMING"
she says sarcastically before continuing
"which of course leads us onto the 2nd term which again is kinda obvious that being the price
is your soul meaning there is no exit, once you're in you're in for all eternity,
which brings onto the last thing that is ownership,
if you enter that means I own your soul which means I own you,
you will be my obedient pet that will willingly do anything I say because you will be compeled to
because you want to make your mistress happy,
you will still know what is going on and you my even beg me to stop which is music to my ears but
you are a puppet and a puppets only purpose is to entertain and that is what I like,
when everyone pays attention to me and entertains me,
so with that all said thats the end.
so crimson beat the breezy,
* a famous dj bat pony with his own factory
* eternal life
* and anything you could ever ask for
do you want to become my new toy and make all your dreams come true?"
Crimson was so excited, everything he could ever want, all his dream coming true and it was just
a signature away, but was he really going to do this?
was he really going to reduce himself to a puppet to be a bat pony d.j.?
he sat in silence for what to him seems like hours, every so often looking up and over at the demon pony who seemed to have lost all interest and was now playing a 3DS on silent as not to disturb him,
after around half a hour crimson had reached his decision but the words themselves were the hardest things to say, every time he opened his mouth it was like the words were stuck, never being
able to leave his lips but eventually they did.
"i....i....r....ready"
midnight still lost in her game, crimson thinking he would be ignored again got a bit more
confidence in his voice and repeated himself
"I'm ready Midnight"
he was ignored once more
"umm...Mid..."
Before he could finish he was interrupted with Midnight screaming YES, while throwing her hooves
and going on to brag about her accomplishment.
"i did it, i beat majunga on 3 heart run with with no magic milk, no great changeling sword
and no enraged celestia face decoration"
looks over to see a confused crimson
"sorry sometimes I can get really into these things, especially if its a nightmare challenge
run, anyway what decision has the little breezy come to?"
Crimson taking a deep breath as he nervously answers
"I.....I....want...."
Crimson now having Midnight focusing on him made it a lot harder to get out his words,stuttering
he just said any words he could get hold of to try and make his decision he had made come out.
"I...I..want....you...mistress....that is to say............yes.....I mean........"
he was stopped by Midnight softly putting her hoof on his mouth as she knew what he meant.
"its ok hun I understand, so then lets get you ready"
coming round to his side of the desk grinning as she kneels in front of him and takes his hoof,
proclaiming that it might hurt a bit as she lowers crimson's hoof down onto one of her horns fast
enough to cause his hoof to bleed, Crimson trying to recoil his hoof but Midnight kept a firm grip,
she made a solid gold quill spawn upon which she dipped into the open wound on his hoof.
"this time you do have to sign in blood"
she proclaims as she put the quill in crimson's undamaged right hoof,
wanting to get it over with he signs his name in his own blood without hesitation.
The golden quill disappearing, Midnight ignoring the contract for a moment she puts her mouth
over the wound and breaths into it, as she does Crimson felt a strange burning sensation and as it went away so did the pain, looking down to see that as Midnight removed her mouth the wound had
completely healed.
Midnight standing back up,she picks the contract up looking at it for a moment to verify the signiture before making the quill re-appear for a moment to add her signature to complete the
contract and make it official, the quill and the contract poofing away with her now grinning at him with excitement, Crimson getting scared at the menacing grin and insane look in her eye that was being directed at crimson as she spoke.
"thank you Crimson, it was a pleasure doing business with you,
now there is only one thing left to for us to do this night"
crimson nervously asking
"what....what...is that?"
Midnight's grin getting bigger as she spoke
"Your entry fee"
Midnight taking a few steps back and just standing there staring at Crimson grinning,
Crimson getting really scared as he did not know what she was planning, but before he had time to
think he felt himself rise up into the air by his hooves, looking up to see two giant puppet crosses floating above him with strings coming down from them, he saw that two of the strings were attached to his front hooves which was what was lifting him up, following strings he could see that two more were attached to his rear hooves, 1 to his back, 1 to his flank, 1 round his neck and 1 to his head, as he floated there helplessly dangling from the strings the floor beneath him began to glow, looking down to see a glowing red pentagram in a ring under his feet, Crimson panicing but just as he could get a sense of what was happening he could feel the crosses moving, he felt the string around his neck tighten and the one attached to his head move, forcing him to look up straight at Midnight, having no control over his body what so ever midnight spoke.
"like it Crimson this is the kind of power I have over you now, I can do this and all sorts of other things to you at my will"
making a diaper, bib, bonnet, boots and pacifier spawn on Crimson
"Now dance my big baby"
Midnight manipulating the crosses to make Crimson's body move to her will,
all crimson could do was dangle there helplessly and suck on the pasifier as Midnight
played with her new puppet, Crimson blushing at what he was wearing and unable to stop
what was happening to him, Midnight stopping rather quickly though to speak.
"but you're not a puppet to be played with just yet,
you are on them strings to keep you in place while we conduct our final order of business."
Crimson still being controlled could only suck on thepacifiers ,he tried to get words out but
they were all muffled by the pasifier so you could not make out what he was saying,
Midnight continuing on.
"Now you might feel a very strong pulling sensation and you most likely will black out but
trust me you will be fine and remain unharmed and when you wake up you will be in your new
home as a bat pony and your new life will begin... now then say
I am Crimson Beat and i love dressing up as a big baby stallion for my mommy Midnight"
Crimson completely under her control felt the string around his neck tighten even more, forcing
him to spit out the pacifier and repeat the line as much as he did not want to.
"I am Crimson Beat and I like dressing up as a big baby stallion for my mommy Midnight"
Midnight laughing as she watched the big baby stallion blushing with embarassment at what he
had just said.
"OK enough fun, time to finish up here so brace yourself Crimson and try not to be a big baby
about it.......oh looks like im a bit too late there HAHAHAHAHA"
Crimson pouting at her mocking comments,but this was interupted by all his strings tightening to
a ridiculous degree to the point where he could not move a muscle, Midnight getting into a stance
in front of him, her eye around her neck starting to glow, with the eye color changing from red
to blue, as it reached what looked like maximum power Midnight said activate, upon that word Crimson could feel it, a intense pulling sensation as if he was being sucked into the pendant,
as it continued and got more intense white particles started coming off of Crimson then he realized what was going on,the pendant was sucking his soul out, he made the deal so it was Midnight's now and she was sucking it out of his body into her pendant to be locked there for all eternity and
like Midnight said he could feel himself blacking out and just as he was going under he looked at Midnight, her grinning and the big baby stallion heard her last words before he went completely under.
"Welcome to the collection my new puppet"
Crimson awake,jumping up in shock, looking around to see he was in a nice shiny new office,
Midnight sitting beside him.
"morning hun how do you feel?"
Crimson feeling like he had only been out for a few seconds felt fine especially now that the
pulling sensation had gone.
"I feel fine but where am I and how did you do all this in like a day?"
Midnight giggling
"you're in the pent house of crimson industries, your office to be more precise where you will do
all of your work, also a day more like 2 weeks, you had your soul pulled from your body so your
usually out for a week or 2 but you're fine now."
Crimson standing up realizing something was on his body, looking down to see he was still wearing
the baby stuff shouting
"AND WHY AND I STILL DRESSED AS A BABY?!"
Midnight cackling at him
"Because you look so adorable when you're sleeping in that outfit"
Crimson scrunching his nose up at her, Midnight still grinning
"Relax hun it was a joke, its yours to do with as you please now, take it off and throw it away,
keep it because you secretly like it, or put someone else into it and make them embaress themsleves as your puppet for your entertainment, I don't care, for now I have other business to attend to so
I have to run, but I have left you a book with everything you need to know on your desk and if you need anything press the music note button on your telephone and either I or one of my demon ponies or one of my slaves in my castle will pick up and help you out"
walking over and giving him a hug and a kiss on the cheek.
"ok see ya later my big baby stallion"
giggling as she opened a portal and walked through it, the portal closing behind her,
Crimson pouting at the fact she had left him babyfied and while his top priority
was to get out of the baby outfit as quick as possible he wanted to 1st just have a
quick look around and out the windows to get his bearings.
Walking over to his desk he could see that he was just to the south of ponyville, his desk side
window looking down on the town with canterlot far in the background, Filthy Rich enterprises
tower of the left towering high above his new factory, to the east and west of the windows just showed off more of the industrial district and to the south he had a nice view of the everfree forest,
but also to the south one another roof of his factory covered in a glass like green house was his own private orchard filled with shining red, green and golden apples and being like flutterbat now he now needed and craved apples, a feeling of obsession coming over him as he stared hypnotically at the apples, starting to drool onto his bib a bit, his body telling him how good apples were and how he needed them, he could feel himself getting slightly aroused, his somewhat hard stallion hood pressing against the diaper, Crimson having to slap himself hard and look away, knowing he was a bat pony now and he would have to learn to control his craving for apples rather than being hypnotized by them also noticing as he was looking away that the orchard was filled with bats that he could use that scepter Midnight gave him on, now aware of where he was and what he had become it was time to start his new life, proceeding to take off all the baby stuff but just as he was about to throw the baby outfit away he thought about what midnight said and he did like the sound of it.
Why not keep it and make someone else put the baby stuff on for his entertainment,
then he could see how much fun it was to turn someone into his helpless puppet,
to make them do embarassing things against there will,
how it would make him feel like his mistress if he had that kind of control over someone,
giggling and saying to himself.
"hehe yes I like the sound of that,
oh i feel sorry for whoever ends up as my puppet......
oh wait no I don't and they won't mind as they will have no choice
but to love being my big baby puppet and obeying there daddy crimson.
and from that point on Crimson started his new life as the bat pony D.J. of ponyville,
selling instruments from his factory and converting those who found out his secrets into
the sub-woofers, but you all know that story and if not this was the back story chapter and the present day chapter about his rise to fame, the sub-woofers and the one he made into his puppet
to be a good daughter and obey his daddy crimson comes later.
THE END
"p.s. the one that got attached to my puppet crosses and now obeys there daddy Crimson is Insane Spyro.
Also tell me what you guys Think of Crimson beat's full origin Story also here's who midnight Devilwitch is and what she looks like
Image size
1024x723px 244.98 KB
© 2015 - 2024 Adv-Magearna-Giada
Comments9
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
that little trickster pony. i might wanna fight this little thing. oh though, crimson might have some tricks up his sleeve.